2015年6月英语四级作文

版本一

命题解析

本题要求首先描述图画，然后评论家长在其孩子成长中的作用。图中显示：一位女儿兴高采烈地告诉母亲：“妈妈，好消息!我被您选择的大学录取了。”显而易见，本题的主旨是：父母为子女做出了太多的决定，造成子女缺乏独立。

关于两代关系这一话题，国内写作考试已经多次考察。2003年考研(课程)写作考察图画作文“温室花朵经不起风雨”，即父母溺爱造成子女缺乏独立。2010年12月，四级写作考察“父母如何让孩子独立”。如果之前研究过以上真题，本题易如反掌。

写作思路：

1、本文首段应简要描述图画，指出有些父母过于包办造成子女缺乏独立。

2、次段写法比较灵活，可以具体分析父母过于包办的原因，也可以进行举例论证。

3、尾段最好提出建议措施，呼吁父母放手给孩子自由，而子女应努力寻求独立。

参考范文：

The drawing vividly reflects a daughter is chatting with her mother in their house. The eyes sparkling with delight, the daughter tells her mother, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.” Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that the daughter is lack of independence due to her mother’s doting care.

The lovely daughter is naturally associated with the only children in our current society; the college of the mother’s choice epitomizes parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.

Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the thought-provoking drawing. On the one hand, we can frequently use it to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems.

版本二

命题解析

本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论这个孩子对上学的理解。图画显示：一个小孩问母亲：如果我的手机已经知道一切，为什么我还要上学呢?显而易见，本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学。

国内写作考试中已经反复考察手机这一热点话题。2009年MBA写作考察“手机短信”，2010年考研英语(二)写作考察“手机入网”，2013年12月四级写作考察“手机在人们生活中越来越多的使用”，也考查了“网络对学习的影响，以及教育是否仅仅是获得信息”。2014年12月，考研英语(一)写作再次考察“手机时代的‘聚会’”。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题，诸多表达均可使用。本题尤其和13年12月四级写作考察的“网络对学习的`影响”异曲同工，几乎就是原题重考。

写作思路：

1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。

2、次段最好进行正反论证，说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息，但无法取代教育，教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。

3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应该合理使用手机，同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

参考范文：

It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks.

In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.

版本三

命题解析

本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论这种现代生活。图画显示：现代人无论工作、居家、娱乐还是睡眠，都与电脑密不可分。显而易见，本题主旨为电脑或网络对现代生活的影响。

国内写作考试中已经反复考察电脑或网络这一热点话题。2002年6月四级写作考察“大学生使用电脑情况”，2009年考研写作考察“网络的‘近’与‘远’”，2012年6月六级写作考察“网络对人际共同的影响”，2013年12月四级写作考察“网络对人们沟通方式的影响”。2015年6月，四级写作再次考察电脑或网络这一话题。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题，诸多表达均可使用。

写作思路：

1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出人们无论工作、家庭、休闲或休息，都与电脑关系密切。

2、次段最好进行正反论证，说明电脑有利有弊：一方面可以满足工作生活的需要并娱乐自我，另一方面过度沉迷也会浪费大量的时间和精力。

3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应该扬长避短，在合理使用电脑的同时，避免过度沉迷。

参考范文：

As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams.

The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.

Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.