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Beijing is changing
Every body knows that Beijing is changing. From buildings to the publictransportation, everything is changing. And Beijing is becoming better andbetter. Last year, Beijing has hold the 2008 Olympic Games successfully and hasbecome the focus of the world.
Beijing change is inevitable, because China is developing, and the world isdeveloping.
The better Beijing changes, the better china changes. Yesterday, thepresident of U.S.A has come to visit Beijing, that means Beijing has isdeveloped better than before. If one day I have a chance, I will develop Beijingto be the best city in the world!
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